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Narrowing Faith Down

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Narrowing Faith Down

Faith is really hard to find, even in the best of the best of your so called best friends.
Finding faith is more difficult than trying to locate a needle in a gigantic pile of hay.
Faith is common in dogs; however, faith is the toughest to find in Homo sapiens.
I guess I made it clear that true loyalty is definitely not a luxurious buffet.
Bestowing and retaining trust gives us a wholesome purpose to live.
When you realize the power of faith, isn’t it greater than gold?
Trust is something only valiant people get, and in turn, give.
 Devotion not only looks good on you, it’s healthy to hold.
No matter what anyone says, faith will always be hip.
Nope, it won’t die off, it won’t make you asinine.
Dedication flowers out of a valid relationship.
You’ll know when it makes you divine.
I hope you can see with your eyes,
I’m trying to narrow it down.
You see, I haven’t found it.
I’m using the philosophy
Of others who I admire
To hunt it down.
And I can
Tell you,
Is easier
To find

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:27:00 PM
    Hi Kim , I noticed a cretin pattern in your poem, and how it all ends in faith... just like life... enjoyed~LINDA

    Kim Avatar Jack Kim
    Date: 4/30/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks :)