Nancy

nancy sinatra and her custom boots made for walking AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on June 13, 2018

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Mick Talbot

Date: 6/14/2018 10:46:00 PM

Hope I have not spoilt it all by saying its a senryu, cos my words I hope, thought-provoking and one of these days you'll write a haiku true. Having fun, this comment based on two of Nancy's hits, ;-) Mick

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2018 11:08:00 PM

Not at all, Mick - it's a work in progress pending my upcoming clarification between modern haiku and senryu. Should all be clear within a few weeks. In the meantime following my muse and will finetune as needed later. Line xx

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/14/2018 1:04:00 AM

Senryu, Line? Mick

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2018 9:29:00 AM

The reason I have this as a haiku (for the moment) is that the second line is an actual song title frequently heard on the radio... so it is a moment captured... but I may agree to change the form once I learn more about the fine line between modern haiku and modern senryu. Meetings actually set up with 2 editors of Haiku Canada who are busy but very knowledgeable... so worth the wait.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/13/2018 10:24:00 PM

Fun fun fun

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2018 11:13:00 PM

Flashback to that era, Kim. Line xx