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Go right on and cry now, chile, yo tears are well deserved, Nana'd cry right wid you, if she thought that she'd be heard. See how dat raven cocks his head, his eye a shiny bead? He know mo dan he let on, and you best take his lead. Come here, chile, let me rock you, Nana hep you dry yo tears, Nana knows why you is crying, Nana's been around fo years. Relax and rest your head, chile, let me hum a lullaby, soon your tears will be forgot, you be sleeping, by and by. Yes, Nana knows why babies cry, Nana's lived in this ole world, and as the child is comforted, her teardrops fall like pearls. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/12/2010 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Danielle. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful Rhyme being featured this week, Danielle. Big contratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. It's a beautiful lullabye to be hummed to a child who cries. Nana must have been a wondeful and loving person. I have missed your poetry on PoetrySoup, and I hope that your health is improving. Best wishes and God bless you. Love and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Danielle. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 3:48:00 PM
Congrats Danielle on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv... hope u are doing well my friend...
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:02:00 AM
It's better late than never, they say. I finally have time to go back and read a few contest winners. I definitely did NOT want to miss out on this one. I know it has been awhile, but your dialect deserves praise!!! Congratulations are still in order for your success, Danielle, in Deborah's dialect contest. Tears actually came to my eyes when I read this... Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/28/2009 12:42:00 PM
Danielle, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/28/2009 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Danielle. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2009 8:35:00 AM
What a sweet poem, Danielle! A wonderful entry for the contest! Congratulations! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 9/27/2009 7:32:00 AM
A lovely poem, and a fine win, Danielle. Many congratulations!
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Date: 9/27/2009 5:44:00 AM
congrats on placing in contest nice read could see imagery clearly you should print this out and place it on a plaque for this family thanks for sharing keep up the great writing
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Date: 8/23/2009 5:26:00 PM
Most excellent and endearing effort!!!!!! Please add African American dialect to the bottom of the verse for the contest my friend! Light & Love always
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Date: 6/24/2009 7:19:00 AM
I see that you tried sending soup mail, Danielle...but it never came through (for whatever reason?)...don't know if you'd like to try again? Thanks :)
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Date: 6/23/2009 5:41:00 PM
Can almost see them in my mind's eye....her sitting in the rocker holding him...keeping him comforted with her crooning. Lovely poem. ~
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