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Naked Ripples

Translucent ripples, catching the morn's azure blue ~~ Reflections abound in glistening sparkle dance ~~ Before me she swims, my love http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-16.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/19/2011 11:56:00 AM
Very enchanting Tanka James, love the imagery :)
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:40:00 AM
This is an amazing Tanka James!Love it---kashinath
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:18:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:31:00 AM
What an enchanting tanka, James! Enjoyed reading this beautiful write --- really liked each line here :)
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Date: 2/16/2011 1:23:00 PM
i love the ripples,the beautiful imagery you transmit. .a serene picture of this lady in her swim :)lovely poetry James
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:23:00 AM
now, this one i like.. so superbly penned with meatphors of waters sprinkled all over!! if for a contest, winning tidings to you, james! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:55:00 PM
This is a decently written tanka. The title is certainly an eye-catcher.
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:34:00 PM
wow, I really like the picture this creates. Chris is right. It's alluring!
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:01:00 PM
What a beautiful image of this woman swimming in the sparkling water. Beautiful poem, James! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2011 1:24:00 PM
What a brilliant image you capture here. Well done
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