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Naked In the Sand

We walked along lakeside today Hand in hand, barefoot in sand Unfortunately, I had to unfold My hands to pick up a shell It was so beautiful, dear I wish you were there We played a game of catch today Kicking up the sand all along Loping, giggling, splashing But I fell down on my rear Too much laughing, dear I wish you were near And then in the cove, made love Just you and I as one my lover Nature engulfed our bodies In pure heavenly delight Perfect rapture, dear Oh how I yearned We made a small fire in the pit Just as the sun began to sleep We sat there all cuddled up And reveled in the beauty It was marvelous, dear I missed you terribly We fell asleep on bed of sand Warmed with gentle breeze Morning then softly arose Caressing us with day A superb morn, dear Naked, in the sand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/29/2008 8:14:00 PM
Deborah that was simply beautiful - Congrats on a second into the finals - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/19/2008 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Deb. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2008 9:28:00 AM
Lovely, Deborah. Best wishes for the next round. lainie
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Date: 8/4/2008 8:13:00 PM
a warm piece of work you penned,enjoyed it.
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