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Naked in the Sand

We walked along lakeside today
Hand in hand, barefoot in sand
Unfortunately, I had to unfold
My hands to pick up a shell
It was so beautiful, dear
I wish you were there

We played a game of catch today
Kicking up the sand all along
Loping, giggling, splashing
But I fell down on my rear
Too much laughing, dear
I wish you were near

And then in the cove, made love
Just you and I as one my lover
Nature engulfed our bodies
In pure heavenly delight
Perfect rapture, dear
Oh how I yearned

We made a small fire in the pit
Just as the sun began to sleep
We sat there all cuddled up
And reveled in the beauty
It was marvelous, dear
I missed you terribly

We fell asleep on bed of sand
Warmed with gentle breeze
Morning then softly arose
Caressing us with day
A superb morn, dear
Naked, in the sand

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  1. Date: 11/29/2008 8:14:00 PM
    Deborah that was simply beautiful - Congrats on a second into the finals - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 3:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Deb. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/3/2008 9:28:00 AM
    Lovely, Deborah. Best wishes for the next round. lainie

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 8:13:00 PM
    a warm piece of work you penned,enjoyed it.