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Naked Dreams

Fifty years old and back in high school Standing here naked like a total fool No one seems to care That I am totally bare Not noticing me is much more uncool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2010 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Joe in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:50:00 PM
I know the feeling. " Here I Am!" What? Nothing?! Thank you for picking my little piece for your top 10. It is a honor that I humbly accept , given yoiur facility in the humoir/ limerick form. Thank you, Gerard.
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:28:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your big win in John's contest with this original and unique ..creative write .. enjoy another biggie..with luv..
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:53:00 PM
Yes, I would agree with that, JOe. What a nightmare. Congratulations. (I went to a HS reunion after 50, almost like a bad dream too, seeing how everyone changed!) Luv, andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:28:00 PM
My high school dream is forgetting my locker combination ..time after time.. congrats on your win with this one..Bg
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:23:00 PM
Congratulations, Joe. I dream about Highschool too, But I can't find my class room. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:19:00 PM
lCongraltulations on your great limerick and your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 7/21/2010 8:09:00 PM
very good limerick, loved it , good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/21/2010 7:49:00 PM
Wow so true! Wonderful limerick Joe, I'm sure it'll place well!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/21/2010 7:14:00 PM
That was my dream too, only I went to work and was very upset that no one paid attention to me. But being fifty is even funnier. Great write, I enjoyed the write. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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