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Naked and Wet

She bathes me in water, scented with flowers Not a typical way a man should so bathe Yet, here I am naked and have been for hours Her hands cleansed my body, I now feel so saved The smile she gives me, this man it so makes I feel like a king that is loved by the queen For all that she wants, I am hers, so she takes This is the best way to bathe or the best that I’ve seen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/1/2010 2:55:00 PM
does she have a sister?or can we talk about a clone?
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:24:00 PM
Enjoy the splendour of the joy ... and may your inspiration grows forever with your enjoyment. Bravo on this write.
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Date: 3/17/2009 6:39:00 PM
Hi Michael! This poem title urges readers to it....lovely ! You seem to be clean of any relationship blues....and full of relationship bliss. yeay...This is one of a kind my friend, Nicely put! God bless ya ~ Your friend at the soupie...jane
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:52:00 AM
~lol~ I am laughing at that first comment. So sensual, and I must agree with that last line. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:05:00 AM
again sweet-- last time a woman bathed me I was five LOL
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