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Naked

in the truth; silence we see, each other! naked and alone I see your love light bright I see depth to your soul I see your burning past I see your woman want I see your every need there is no pretense just you, and still, you are all I want!

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Date: 3/22/2017 5:11:00 PM
title pulled me in lol maybe you should write naked and free more often...:)
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Just James
Date: 3/28/2017 11:55:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Charlotte; electronic design engineer by day so structure is my life...but there is hope for me ..:)
Date: 3/19/2017 5:18:00 PM
So sensual and raw. Beautiful.
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Just James
Date: 3/20/2017 11:20:00 AM
Tx Jean
Date: 3/15/2017 8:46:00 AM
Beautifully expressed!
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Just James
Date: 3/15/2017 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Carol
Date: 3/15/2017 1:09:00 AM
So much convey in so few words! Stripped down to the bare essentials! You have found your essence, well done, James.
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Just James
Date: 3/15/2017 2:53:00 AM
Thank you very much WW..it really is a naked poem..:)

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