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Naked

What is naked? Without clothes? Sky clad nightmare feeling shame? Or deepest secrets all exposed? Wretched, woeful, just the same Stripped and helpless to them all Friends and foes just point and laugh Curled up in a foetal ball Fragile façade epitaph So do I yield? Give up? Withdraw? Cower from the searing light Let my guilt just ache and gnaw Shrivel up without a fight Or do I stand both strong and proud Exhibit all! Here's what I've got! Cry out, berate, exclaim out loud I'm starking naked! Well? So what?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/29/2016 12:13:00 PM
Nicely written, Mark!
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Mark Martin
Date: 12/29/2016 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Mrunali! :-)
Date: 12/9/2016 12:16:00 AM
Hi Mark, others wear masks ans fool only themselves. Being vulnerable and feeling exposed is your truth . It tells you also who your friends are. Nice write
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Jannie!
Date: 11/17/2016 10:01:00 AM
Great write,Mark, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/24/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Eve! :-)
Date: 11/17/2016 12:03:00 AM
That is wonderful, exploring all the sorts of nakedness :) Congratulations.
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Date: 11/24/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Darren! :-)
Date: 11/16/2016 2:47:00 PM
Mark congratulations on your wonderful win with this beautifully penned poem ~
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Mark Martin
Date: 11/24/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings! :-)
Date: 11/16/2016 2:03:00 PM
Congrats, Mark on this spectacular poem!
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Mark Martin
Date: 11/19/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Kim! :-)
Date: 11/16/2016 10:14:00 AM
So well done, congrats!
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Mark Martin
Date: 11/16/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Richard! :-)

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