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Weeping willow tree, you sob bitter tears when autumn steals your clothes. Contest Monoku Madness Sponsored by John Hamilton 08~18~16

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Laura Leiser

Date: 8/26/2016 11:20:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Jan! Congrats on your top win:)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2016 11:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 8/24/2016 3:51:00 AM

Fantastic write Jan - beautifully put - congratulations Mark

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2016 7:55:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/23/2016 10:53:00 PM

Wow! Great visual!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2016 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman

Date: 8/23/2016 8:59:00 PM

Excellent monoku Jan and congrats on your top win

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2016 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Greg:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/23/2016 8:54:00 PM

Congrats on your top win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2016 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 8/23/2016 4:01:00 PM

Congrats on your top placement lovely lady! :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2016 6:15:00 PM

Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/23/2016 12:55:00 AM

Wow Jan a worthy top place.....Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2016 1:57:00 AM

Thanks Seren - I don't just write poop poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/22/2016 8:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2016 1:56:00 AM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/22/2016 9:34:00 AM

Poor naked willow!Admire your humor Jan and congrats on your top place!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:53:00 AM

John asked for humour .. I am delighted he liked my poem so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 6:52:00 AM

I am so glad he loved it too Jan. Big congrats! Awesome first place! 7 ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:53:00 AM

Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/22/2016 4:18:00 AM

Quite a humour. Congratulations for the win, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:53:00 AM

Thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx

Just James

Date: 8/22/2016 1:18:00 AM

Fabulous win! Well done

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:54:00 AM

Thanks so much James:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/21/2016 10:49:00 PM

Congrats Jan on your top 1st place with this moving line. Love Sunita :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:54:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 8/21/2016 10:48:00 PM

Beautiful win.....

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Ironic Zink

Date: 8/21/2016 8:54:00 PM

Nice win Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 8:43:00 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:10:00 PM

WAY to go, JAn. Top of the podium!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:56:00 AM

For a writer of poop poems I'm not doing too badly lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 7:20:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your 1st Place win in the Monoku contest! Great imagery! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Ronald Kent

Date: 8/21/2016 6:33:00 PM

Nice write and congrats on the win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Ronald:-) hugs Jan xx

Sonia Walker

Date: 8/21/2016 5:55:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your top billing. A delightful Monoku to read. ~ Sonia

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 9:57:00 AM

Many thanks Sonia I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2016 5:01:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Jan....another superb first place!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2016 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Paul I'm so glad John liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/21/2016 4:22:00 PM

Hi Jan, This was good! Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2016 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Alexis I'm delighted to place so well in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 8/21/2016 3:52:00 PM

This was perfect! Congrats on the great win!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2016 4:03:00 PM

WOW John I am delighted to place so well:-):-) thank you so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/21/2016 3:35:00 PM

I love this, Jan! Agnes

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2016 4:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/20/2016 9:11:00 AM

Hi Jan, a most sincere and beautiful write from your pen. This is such a gentle Monou. Well written Jan. A Monoku with such wonderful content. Your words sing as always Jan. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2016 9:37:00 AM

Thanks as ever for your continued support Mike:-) hugs Jan xx