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Naked

I sit here, oblivious to worldly obstacles, surrounded by air, and air alone, presenting myself to G-d as only He can see me, Unashamed, uninhibited, to partake in endeavors that others flee for free, observing subtleties that can only be seen, through the eyes of a naked man. (11/16/92)

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Date: 3/23/2015 1:39:00 AM
Well penned! #7
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Suburban Lovechild
Date: 3/23/2015 7:02:00 AM
Thx Njeri, too kind...
Date: 2/27/2015 11:34:00 PM
Just now seeing your response to me (I only see these reply things by accident!!) No, no insomnia. I get it a lot though. Part of getting old. uggggg
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Date: 2/26/2015 11:50:00 PM
such an interesting little poem. Glad I found this one to see right before going off for the night!
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Suburban Lovechild
Date: 2/27/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thx Andrea, I appreciate the kind thoughts...and please tell me that I/it didn't contribute to insomnia for you last night lol ;)

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