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Naive Gesture

. Such an irresistible naïve gesture from those sparkling bedroom eyne Yes slowly with a softness which even at a distance I could feel the silk slip to the cold wooden floor fell Out came the ink and the slip and they too fell to the cold wooden floor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/2/2011 5:57:00 PM
Very passionate and awesome. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/29/2011 12:46:00 PM
oh a jolt of passion pervades this piece as I read before but enticed me once again to enjoy your thoughts James.. thankxx for sweet comments on my work luv.. appreciate the uplift...
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Date: 10/26/2011 8:12:00 PM
kinda boring, eh? heh, just one thought in a sea of six billion. namaste~N
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Date: 10/26/2011 4:04:00 AM
this is simply superb! waiting for more...
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Date: 10/25/2011 9:35:00 PM
agreed with Nancy. this is one sexy beautiful piece!
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:50:00 AM
,Good morning,~ james ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up*. By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.
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Date: 10/15/2011 2:52:00 AM
I REALLY like the way you worded things in this poem. One of your best!
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James Peranteau
Date: 2/19/2015 7:19:00 AM
Hello my dear poetic friend ! Well Andrea, I've been editing my writes for the last few days.......and adding some....and I noticed something....since you have been on the soup, you have read at the least, 90% of my writes ! I want to take the time to thank you now; for all of your uplifting comments...Thank you Andrea ! Have a blessed week............much love, james
Date: 10/14/2011 7:52:00 PM
seductive in a sweet and demure way James .. luv that slip falling to the floor .. oh.. romantic rendezvous in full swing my friend.. happy weekend u two..luv..
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:05:00 PM
It all happens with such a subtle softness to give the reader that languid feeling of patiently waiting for all to happen. Lovely James, it whispers!
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Date: 10/13/2011 6:30:00 PM
now that's just sexy. Beauty eve to ya, JP~N
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Date: 10/13/2011 1:43:00 PM
I should think so. Only a castrati could resist. Up to your usual artistic tricks, eh, Sir James. Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:09:00 PM
lovely creative flow and rich substance, james.. a real poesy for me!.. greeat last line to end the thought! :) huggs
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