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Nailed To a Cross

Have you ever hung on a cross metaphorically Have you ever had too many lines on the mirror too many labels peeled of bottles at dawn cones that wreak seen monsters come out of waves you surf eleven in the morning Can you relate to this attempt to catch my attempt to prompt you to think without indoctrination without malice with empathy congruence and fidelity but by quoting have you ever hung on a cross I have failed. And He has conquered In this sub urban crucifixion Of the mind Have you found your crossroad You know, the one where Everything hangs in the balance And your decision is a paradigm shift Or is this where it ends?

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Date: 4/8/2016 4:34:00 PM
You may have failed but I think you win! Good job! Love Jah!
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:06:00 AM
Good work. You possess a good eye and have something to say that comes from observation. This is the sort of poetry that leaves the reader smarter.
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Date: 3/29/2016 5:11:00 PM
Beautiful. The way you carve your practiced diction into this work of art is flawless.
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Date: 3/29/2016 5:02:00 PM
Very powerful and beautiful write! Emotional and relatable. Thank you for sharing! Xx
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Date: 3/29/2016 4:19:00 PM
No, I haven't hung on a cross but my sins hung Him on that tree..Sara
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