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N R There Was An Old Woman

There was an old woman who lived on the streets. She watched over children making her feel complete. They ate in soup kitchens some broth without bread. Their bellies never quite full as they laid down their heads. Their hard little beds in a room shaped like a 'U'. In an abandon old building off Le Hamel Au Roux. She was sent down from above to help these lost kids. Reasons not totally understood why these children had fled. At times there were so many she didn't know what to do. So she gave them her love and protected them from harm too. She found caring homes for each and everyone in the Village of Firth. She was only given so much time to serve these children on earth. She deemed herself well and is now angel worthy of her wings, Looking down from above she sees all her children now smiling And they're consumed in what will be rather than what 'twas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/1/2013 3:15:00 PM
There was an old angel who's now won her wings. And love in the hearts of all those boy's and girls sings. Congrats on your win Connie. We are so filled with love and goodness from this poem. Thank God for old women. :)
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations and Happy Easter!
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:04:00 PM
Connie, this is nice, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2013 6:45:00 PM
congrats on your win Connie
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Date: 3/29/2013 6:18:00 PM
A very neat story. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/29/2013 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:37:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:12:00 PM
I remember thinking this was so good for the contest. CONGRATS.
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Date: 3/29/2013 12:33:00 PM
Hi and congratulations on your win Connie love xx
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Date: 3/29/2013 11:48:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win !!! Really loved this idea for a NR poem...cute and heartfelt !!
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Date: 3/20/2013 4:25:00 PM
Wonderful write. You have a talent for this.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/20/2013 5:03:00 PM
Your comment means so a lot Carol. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 3/20/2013 7:17:00 AM
I loved this one, Connie. I worked with the homeless for a couple of years...I wish I was still able to. Great poem!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/20/2013 5:08:00 PM
Caleb thanks for stopping by and commenting. It means a lot to me. Giving warms the souls. Bless you...Connie
Date: 3/18/2013 2:35:00 PM
gosh, you really did a great job with the challenge of the nursery rhyme contest. A very enjoyable poem, dear.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/18/2013 5:46:00 PM
Andrea thank you. Your comment means a lot. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
Date: 3/18/2013 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Sad that this work speaks of truth in all societies..No one should be left to live like this but it is still happening..Thanks for stopping by, your presence was uplifting..Sara
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/18/2013 5:47:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 3/17/2013 10:48:00 AM
lovely write here - a sure winner and congrats on your wins : )
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/18/2013 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Jack. Your comment and congrats means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 3/17/2013 6:53:00 AM
love this Connie, it must be for a contest and if so I am sure I cannot jinx it by saying it will do well xx
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/17/2013 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Mandy. Yes, it's in the Nursery Rhyme contest. Your comment means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 3/16/2013 6:28:00 PM
This is a beautiful twist on the old lady in a shoe nursery rhyme! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic poem this afternoon! What a masterfully written piece, Great Work!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/17/2013 7:14:00 AM
Thank your Russell for stopping by. Your comment means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 3/16/2013 6:22:00 PM
Terrific entry for the contest. I believe this will do well. Joe
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/17/2013 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Joe for stopping by. Your comment means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 3/16/2013 6:01:00 PM
An adorable poem, beautifully written Connie! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/17/2013 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Anne for stopping by. Your comment means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie

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