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Sun Moon Stars Earth Very well my shortest poem written

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John Rhinem

Date: 11/21/2011 12:08:00 PM

Smile, "Just Having A Tad of Fun With Your Precious Lovely Beauty Sweet Shannon ;-) Sarah Begged Myself to Do It Because, She Has A Huge Crush Upon Your Loveliness * Ssssssh * My love always, John *

John Rhinem

Date: 11/21/2011 11:56:00 AM

* "YounKnow That I Would Be A Liar * If I Were to Say to You * Girl We Couldn't Get Much Higher * Come On Baby Light My Fire * Tis Your Beauty Which Inspires * My Beautiful Luv * Always & Forever & Forever Beyound * Come On Baby * Your Sarah." *

James Fraser

Date: 6/14/2011 11:55:00 AM

What we know at most, summed up splendidly Shannon - nice one :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/11/2011 7:36:00 AM

Dear Shannon, This speaks of YOUR intense LOVE of POETRY, short and opens the Soul to YOUR Heart Superbly done I am quite Flattered with YOUR Gracious Comments on my POETRY This Morning I have read several of YOUR POEMS Free Verse is one of my favorite forms A Hearty Congratulations on YOUR First Place in my Contest I'm sure I will see a lot of YOU in the Winners Circle So glad to meet YOU and Welcome to the SOUP Family with LOVE, YOUR Liege; ALWAYS and FOREVER.. .HG