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Below is the poem entitled MyTreeAndI which was written by poet Mark Hibbins. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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By dusk, the day will take its toll
I unwind with my daily stroll
And every day my eyes behold 
A tree, upon a mound. 

I see his life how he would see
We keep eachother company
Together, just my tree and me
And noone else around.

We laugh and sing and dance and play
And quickly waste the sun away
And soon its light that lights the day
Is nowhere to be found.

And now it seems I cannot see
I’m stuck here, fading, with my tree
Embraced, my mind becomes the leaves
My soul becomes the ground.

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  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:27:00 PM
    I enjoyed this very much. Love trees. Welcome to the Soup. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:34:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Mark. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/16/2012