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Mythical Onset

Angels watch from sky Seeing mysterious waves Hiding eyes from doom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/1/2010 8:38:00 PM
Nicely written Senryu. Keep the creative keyboard writing.
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Date: 5/1/2010 4:17:00 PM
What a thought provoking poem. The title works well with the piece. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/1/2010 3:26:00 PM
Sad isn't it..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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