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Mythical Moon By Day

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As dragonflies squint in the rayless night. My glimmer of whimsy embraces flight. Yet faith wanes, and enthusiasm is slight. As lambency falters—the horizon is bleak. In a stupendous stupor—drifting on the creek. All my hopes and wishes were dubious. The path to gloat is fraught with malicious. Each stage entailed making us furious. My whimsy used to be—as bright as a rainbow. Overall, they're vanishing - along with the glow. Moon by day is superb, and myths delight. Gibbous and full moons are rich and unique. Crest of soft verve in love delirious Moon by day tells us of how our might blow.

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Date: 6/11/2023 8:42:00 AM
Subtle and wonderful poem. Read part of it: All my hopes and wishes were dubious. Never give up.
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Date: 6/11/2023 8:05:00 AM
Looks like you did it to form with cool images. It was kind of difficult, eh,,? Mine isn't posted yet But I wished I could be more creative with it.
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