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Mystic Rose

Mystic Rose    ( Acostic )

M...Malice - is not in your heart.
Y...Young at heart - you are.
S...Silent - sometimes you have to be.
T...Teacher to many - you have been.
I...Imagine - all the good you can do.
C...Capricious - you are not.

R...Rose - a very dellecate flower - you are.
O...Observer - you always are.
S...Someone captured your heart.
E...Embrace life and be happy...

o4/10/2013 Written by
Lucilla M. Carrillo

Note: This is a dedication to
a very nice Lady here in Poetry Soup
One that you should know.

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  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:07:00 PM
    Beautiful simply beautiful.- Edward

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:19:00 PM
    Beautiful dedicated poem beautifully worded. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Such a lovely dedication! I am sure she is delighted to receive it!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 11:32:00 AM
    This is so sweet my very dear friend Lucilla! I extremely love this one again. Another wonderful dedication of yours & excellent acrostic as always! Wish you all the best and thanks a lot for your precious time reading my latest poems. I tried to clarify the fact about the great wall being seen from the outer space but, from the information I've read, it isn't true. So, I wrote it based from my experience ;)). Thanks a lot again for everything!God bless my dear Lucy! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:51:00 AM
    Loved the dedication and your humble spirit! Keep on doing what you Lucilla... there will always be someone who appreciates it! :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Dear Lucy, loved everything about what`s in your heart. I love the idea to . Terry Love xoxoxo Got a 7 >>>>

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:05:00 PM
    You describe her perfectly, she is so very special! BTW Lucilla, your hats are amazing, just love them! :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Thank you my dear friend for bestowing such an honor, I am deeply touched. Never you I touched your life in such a way to produce this, I will treasure each word, you just made the sun shine in my computer room, and you've warmed my heart today, bless you for this, love you girl, now and always yours, V

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Awww, a sweet dedication. I'm sure Vie will love it. A nice piece of poetry, Lucilla. :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:28:00 AM
    This is lovely! I'm sure she will be overjoyed to read it! :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:48:00 PM
    I know her well Lucilla, and she means a lot to many of us here on the Soup...Including me! This poem is just wonderful for her, it will mean a lot to her to read! You have written such a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:24:00 PM
    - I love it and M.R. will love it ..... surely! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:07:00 PM
    She will love this dedication.....and yes, she is a gem! Nicely done!!