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Mystic Mars

Mystic Mars great galactic ghoul red magnetic umb mushrooms the masculine mars.... Written July 7th,2015 For contest "Subject Mars" by Joe Maverick

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Date: 7/27/2015 10:36:00 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, I think of your haiku as haiku were meant to be; very concise, deep, meaningful and with a strong message. I rarely rate poems. This clearly gets a 7. I rated it accordingly. Congratulations on a great win. This was very entertaining, very creative. Have a great day. Earl
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:12:00 AM
Nice to see a Haiku making an appearance on the theme, Dr Upma, well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:10:00 PM
DR UPMA Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:44:00 PM
very creative Dr Sharma - love the clever alliteration - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2015 10:20:00 AM
Nicely done Dr Upma...Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/11/2015 3:41:00 PM
This one struck a seven with me. I say you'll win!! Keep writing great poems Dr Upma. Ken
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Date: 7/9/2015 2:34:00 AM
creatively written in a unique style.. this is WOW!!!! good luck in the contest, Dr. Sharma :))
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Date: 7/8/2015 9:13:00 AM
Oh...interesting and unique way you did this, Dr. Upma. I like it!
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:47:00 PM
great haiku Dr Upma gl in contest hugs
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:44:00 PM
Great M alliteration going on!! good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:19:00 PM
Upma, awesome for the contest and thanks for visiting my poems, God's love ... and O, the murmurring and drunken moon
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:18:00 PM
well crafted piece on mars, dr upma.. i like the ghoul part.. huggs
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