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Mysterious Twinkling

I often sit and wonder At what stars are made Could they be made of science Could they be God given? Looking at them shining I set out to imagine What if I was a love fairy Twinkling on Earth Lonely and lost I cannot hide my smile Someday I shall be a star Twinkling, twinkling in the dark sky! Anoucheka Gangabissoon Contest : Shine with your Naani Spnsored by Nette Onclaud Date : 25 June 2014

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Date: 7/4/2014 10:10:00 AM
Anoucheka, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA
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Date: 7/3/2014 10:48:00 PM
this reminds me of a love story I saw last year when the two lovers were turned into stars in the sky. I can't even remember its name. but anyway ,Congrats on your win. cute poem.
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Date: 7/1/2014 4:11:00 PM
you are a star anoucheka.. this is so captvating... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your fine win.. huggs
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Date: 7/1/2014 1:41:00 PM
Hi Anoucheka - Bravo on your fine win - well deserved, my friend! This is such a lovely write!
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Date: 7/1/2014 1:01:00 PM
Lovely write and win, Anoucheka, Mohan
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Date: 7/1/2014 10:39:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, Anoucheka. congrats on the win
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