Myself

A light is but a flickering glow a song is but a sweet sound and walking forward as I go no one is around. Life is but a shadow in which we walk the path of destiny my vision is all but narrow I wish we hadn’t lost you and me. You took my hand and lead me away into a world of darkness and left me there where I stand in a jagged room of sharpness. You stole my heart and my innocence I thought you were the one to guide my through the path of life but you left so screw you and everyone. I can’t survive this world alone I thought that you were there but now I see I can’t trust you or anyone anywhere. You stole my soul and my voice so I have nothing left to give the world I live in is not by choice but I have to so I give in. Kill me now while I feel nothing and so everyone can see just how useless I feel by just being me.

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Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:16:00 AM

Dannielle, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/5/2014 12:22:00 AM

A very deep powerful piece - excellent write! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2014 12:12:00 PM

Dannielle,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2014 4:35:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dannielle- I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)