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one day working the frets i discovered the song and I played it over and over hoping she would hear it in her distant land where she had sea and beach long bush tracks and a bike for the lake’s perimeter i dream that she will hear it still on an evening sky and a darkly hidden verandah breathing my fingers’ lilting on my buzzing sunburst axe and love’s discordant harmony

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Date: 8/3/2011 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on making the first round Alistar. Good luck.
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Alistair. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, Carol and Dr Mehta, for your congratulations :) I am totally chuffed about being featured :)
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Alistair. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Alistair
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