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My "you"

Name the ocean and I’ll swim to you The sacrifice of love would be worth it, it’s true I cannot imagine life without my “You” Death would be a better an alternative, than starting anew But the ocean I fail to swim across Is falling out of love, which leaves me at a loss My “You” is gone and the image of her The one thing I long for, the image I would refer I am lost and I cannot find me, My emotions are scrambled, I feel like I cannot see I want to love, to be happy; is that too much to ask? But this ocean I drown, I cannot swim, I cannot complete the task Help me, give me my “You” back to me Just on more time, and I can die happy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/28/2010 7:27:00 AM
A beautiful "lost" write you got here.. I just love the emotions..
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:21:00 AM
Wonderfuly witten and expressed my friend...Michael
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