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My World

MY WORLD When the clouds poured the rain of hope When the river carried the silt that elope When the trees blew the charm of wind When the peaks to heights were pinned When the oceans were travelling to vacations When the sun disturbed by its own creation When the stars were busy decorating the sky When the flowers were busy playing with the flies When the rainbow filled color in this world When the new born baby sleeping curled When the birds ran a marathon of life When the bees busy in decorating the hives I held your hand beneath the clouds danced in rain and singing loud hugging the trees and feeling the wind looking at the peaks that were pinned I look in your eyes deep as oceans and shining bright just like the sun stars seemed dull for a while when you winked ,with a smile flowers and flies all battled and the beauty of rainbow rattled you play the world for me the world which my eyes want to see the world which never has a end a world which will never offend

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Date: 5/22/2015 8:49:00 AM
I liked your poem, Abhishek, with all its images. I want to welcome you to poetry soup and will read more of your poems later. We poets are here for you. So if you have any questions, please ask. I hope you will want to check out my poems as well. That's what poets do, support each other. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:49:00 PM
thank you Guyz :) :)
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Date: 5/17/2015 1:34:00 AM
well thaught n penned..keep writing :)
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