Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

My World

Sami Helbaoui Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled My World which was written by poet Sami Helbaoui. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Sami Helbaoui

Best Sami Helbaoui Poems

+ Fav Poet

My World

The sky is dark, the sun is black stone
The ground is burned, the world is raining with sadness
The moon is black, the flowers are dead
The green is brown, the blue is red
The joy is misery, the love is hate
The living are dead, the pure are lost
My dreams are gone, my hopes are hopeless
My life is nothing, my life is empty
My life is this…
And this is what I live in

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/22/2011 6:56:00 AM
    Thank you all very much! I do appreciate all of your comments.. And to who is worrying about me I am a lot better.. I wrote this poem like 4 months ago.. Now I am a new man.. :) Thanks again to all of you

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 9:05:00 AM
    Very powerful.....thank you....

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 8:53:00 AM
    Tomorrow is another day. Perhaps things will get better. You described a day all humans would like to forget.

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 6:30:00 AM
    Your write here is what most poets I believe feel at one time or another... Thank you for always stopping by an reading my work... Michael

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:47:00 AM
    You have written a sad poem full of beautiful words, so something in you is very alive and amazing and not so empty I think~~

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 7:07:00 AM
    Vividly sad, Sami. Gosh, I hope you don't really feel this way! There is still alot of beauty in the world, but I know what you have described is what depressed people feel. It also sounds like a description of the world after the Apocolypse! Thanks for reading my poetry. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:44:00 AM
    Create. Change. It can be done. Strong lines.