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My World

LOVE. IS THAT WHAT I CRAVE? IF IT DOES THEN WHY CANT I FIND IT? HATE. DOES THAT MEAN ANGER? IF IT DOES. THEN WHY DO I FEEL HOLLOW? PAIN. DOES THAT MEAN SUFFERING? IF IT DOES, THEN WHY DOES IT FEEL COMFORTING? MEMORIES. ARE THEY NOT IMAGES OF THE PAST? IF THEY ARE, WHY IS THERE ONLY SHADOWS? SMILES. DOES THAT MEAN HAPPINESS? IF IT DOES, THEN Y DOES IT HURT? LIFE. WHAT DOES IT MEAN? SHOULD IT MEAN ANY OF THESE THINGS? IF IT DOESNT, THEN Y ARE THEY THERE?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/13/2011 4:48:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Audrey in the contest "Why We Must Go On" sponsored by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2011 8:59:00 PM

Congrats Audrey on your big win in Matt's contest with this great entry ..enjoy luv..

Matt Caliri

Date: 4/12/2011 10:06:00 AM

Love the questions...love the questioning of the questions...congrats on a 9th place finish in my contest!

Phil Boy

Date: 9/27/2010 1:09:00 PM

hey you! P.J.

Royal Trevino

Date: 5/4/2010 6:28:00 PM

wow questions inside of questions, impresive little cousin, i like this one a lot:)

Hosea Griffith

Date: 4/9/2010 11:13:00 PM

I feel the same way. Love, hate, pain, memories, smiles, and life can all leave you guessing and asking questions. >Hosea<

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2010 10:44:00 PM

you have to be lost in life . A relative on the bottom. She is a good poet and friend . Not my bbf . Lindas maybe. but a cool person on here .P.D. WAS HERE.. YOU SHOULD READ A POEM OF MINE . CALLED POETRY POLICE.

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2010 8:49:00 PM

I true ly do miss you guys. At the time . I will live like Audreys poem . I really want to know who wrote this one . Tell me . Who ever it . Has a style like my poetry. I know . REad my Why? Smiles do hurt . Mine hurt all the time.

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2010 8:44:00 PM

Audrey A.k.a. Bellinda... I will write a poem for Audrey than I will post a poem . for Adriana. Than I will post one for Roel . Sister in-law I already posted one for you. Than I will post one for My brother . Than may be he will understand Why. May be one day we can be a family forever. Until than . Just look out for a poem . For each and every one of you. Starting with Audrey. Luv all of you.

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2010 8:40:00 PM

AUDREY YOU ARE GOOD ! IF U WROTE THIS YOU ARE AWESOME FOR SUCH A LITTLE THING . ALSO I WANT YOU TO KNOW THANK U FOR READING ME TONIGHT. i am glad u finally posted a poem . I did try leaving u a comment in the past but could not . if you do not have a poem to comment . I do not know what is happening to this world. but that is life. sometimes we have to let go of the ones we love so we won't get hurt . get my drift.