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My Wonder Mother

From the crack of dawn to hours of late She worked tirelessly for her brood of eight Sweaty and exhausted, waited till everyone ate Then watered down the curry for her plate Written on:04/17/2017 Contest: Form M Monorhyme by Broken Wings

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Date: 4/22/2017 7:04:00 PM
Nicely written , Sara, congratulations on your win. ~*
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:25:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this excellent Monorhyme. It touched my heart.
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sara and tribute, a joy to read.
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Date: 4/19/2017 11:02:00 AM
But for a mothers love...congratulations Sara
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Date: 4/19/2017 10:23:00 AM
The last line says it all!! Lovely meaningful write. Congrats on topping the list!
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Date: 4/19/2017 7:57:00 AM
Hi Sara, I always appreciated and loved my mother. However, that love and appreciation got stronger when I became a mother too. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/18/2017 5:52:00 PM
oh my, I LOVE this one. The poor dear selfless mother!!
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Date: 4/17/2017 2:28:00 PM
a very sensitive verse well done, sara.. huggs
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Date: 4/17/2017 11:15:00 AM
Brought a tear to my eye as my aunt used to do a similar thing with her food ensuring other's got fed before her and she had the remains - on one meal she soaked bread in gravy to make it look like she had meat. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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