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My Withered Flower

My flower My precious flower The flower that gave out many flowers Flowers including me. You were my flower Yes, the mother flower The flower that withered without been sick. I knew one day we might depart You first or me But I never thought of you Just departing so fast, so easily, so silently Without a good bye..! you were not old; Matronly beautiful You marked the beauty of our world you made the scent of our garden The light of our heaven. I always prayed for you to wait a little Just few minutes to see me grow I dreamed you to enjoy my flowers The new garden I'm creating from my seeds. I wanted you to mentor the little roses of mine How to be beautiful in and out How to be beautiful forever. Why you choose not to wait a little? Why you just go that way? What grub made you shrivel? What Pupa withered you so fast? Tell me... Who should I blame then... you or the creator of the chrysalis? I just don't know For sure, my heart will be sick forever.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2015 4:40:00 AM

- Hey Mukoi :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Mukoi Musagasa
Date: 9/29/2015 6:05:00 AM

Thanks Anne, it's nice to be welcomed... I hope to learn a lot from your poetry as well.

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 9:44:00 PM

Mukoi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Mukoi Musagasa
Date: 9/29/2015 6:08:00 AM

Thanks a lot Skat... I've read some of your poems...let me admit; you're a great poet. It's so pleasure meeting you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2015 12:24:00 PM

Mukoi, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mukoi Musagasa
Date: 9/29/2015 6:10:00 AM

Thanks Linda for your encouragement.