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My Wish Indeed

* ** **** ** * There is a kind of magic I can feel it in the air A sprinkling ~ A sparkling A shimmering feeling everywhere Of joyous anticipation a time for celebration Though my wish indeed ‘tis for our World in need ******Of human love and kindness****** ***A child was born give thanks above*** ***** ***** ***** Step back a while and breathe For love is all we really need Written 4th December 2021 Premier Contest 'Winter Wishes ' Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke 6th PLACE Contest A STRAND (1045) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Ann Peck

Date: 1/6/2022 10:54:00 AM

A lovely poem, Ann~especially your last two lines. So true. Congratulations on your big win!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2022 12:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Ann with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/4/2022 9:31:00 PM

" love is all we really need" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/5/2022 11:59:00 AM

Oh bless you dear Christuraj and thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/4/2022 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative shape and write. "Love It" Have a blessed day and New Year..................

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/5/2022 11:58:00 AM

Many thanks dear Paula ~ I am delighted that you "love it" such a compliment. Wishing you a Happy New Year my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/23/2021 3:18:00 PM

Congratson winning Ann. A perfect write Pangie Jolly Holiday Wishes

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/28/2021 8:14:00 AM

Thank you dearest Panagiota for your kind words ~ hugs Ann xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/23/2021 12:13:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL Ann. I love your words and the shape and especially it’s message. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have a joyous Christmas my friend. Blessings xxoo

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:35:00 PM

Bless you dearest Connie with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/15/2021 12:35:00 PM

Ann, love your "sprinkling," "sparkling," "shimmering" wishes! The shape, with snowflake stars, really enhances both the mood and the texture of your delightful penning! Congratulations! Sending you sparkling - shimmering - blessings for Christmas.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:36:00 PM

Thanking you dearest Sam with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/15/2021 1:12:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. A blessed Christmas to you and your family. God bless you.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:37:00 PM

With many thanks dear Beata with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/14/2021 10:38:00 PM

A great design-filled writing. Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:38:00 PM

Thank you dear Christuraj with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/14/2021 8:56:00 PM

Dear Ann, I admire the shape of your poem and adore the beautiful message of love conveyed within, expressed with a generous sprinkling of poetic magic, the shimmer of joy and the sparkle of internal rhymes. Splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:39:00 PM

Bless you dear Susan with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 3:50:00 PM

a joy to see and read!!! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:40:00 PM

Awww thank you dear Jan with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2021 3:47:00 PM

What an awesome entry. BIG congrats. The shape made with your words is wonderful.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:41:00 PM

Bless you dear Andrea with kindest thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/14/2021 2:29:00 PM

Ann, wow! A piece of art, visually and poetically! Especially liked, "A sprinkling ~ A sparkling A shimmering feeling everywhere"--Congratulations! ~ps

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:50:00 PM

Thank you dear PS with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France

Date: 12/14/2021 1:15:00 PM

Ann, beautiful and very creative. Congratulations on your win in Chantelle's Winter Wishes contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:46:00 PM

Thank you dear Constance with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/14/2021 12:46:00 PM

So True, Amen…Congrats! Ed

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:49:00 PM

Many thanks Edward with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/14/2021 10:29:00 AM

WOW!! Congratulations on your win. I love the write and shape. I love your line "For love is all we really need." So very true. Have a blessed day...................

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:34:00 PM

Thank you dear Paula with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 12/10/2021 4:03:00 PM

How delightful! I love your message of love! Good luck in the contest, I think it's a winner. Blessings, Paulette

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:33:00 PM

Bless you dear Paulette, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/4/2021 2:25:00 AM

A beautiful poem and so well arranged.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 2:32:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Victor, with kindest thoughts Ann xx