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My Wish

You sit staring at the wide open space. I take your hand and enter your world Where the sun always shines. Sometimes, I wish I could see the good like you. Outwardly, you are small and frail, But you have a heart of gold. You always want to please, And you dearly love to laugh. The innocence that is you, Makes me want to be better; Better at loving, forgiving and believing. Oh, that I could be more like you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/19/2016 9:04:00 AM
My guess is that they probably want to be more like you. This is a thoughtful piece.
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Just Jane
Date: 10/21/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thank you, I do appreciate the feedback!
Date: 10/18/2016 10:52:00 PM
J*JUNE, GOOD TO SEE YOU HERE. SKAT
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