My Wish

Here's another new year I wish health and prosperity for all dear I know nothing bad will happen ,I've no fear If it happens, I know I'll steer. New year resolution I've made I'll work on past memories to fade I'll hold no grudge I'll accept what is layed To remain happy ,this will be of aid. May everyone's life end on a happy note May all sail happily ,on the life's boat May this happen and our lives we will dote May our lives become anecdotes.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2019 4:23:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Bawa.

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 1/7/2019 1:39:00 AM

Bawa I absolutely loved this. It had rhyme, rhythm and lyrical sentiment. Only the typing error of the misplaced "," which I'm sure was only an oversight or slip of the finger cost you a higher place.

Bawa Talwar
Date: 1/8/2019 10:51:00 AM

Thank you for appreciation. I know things could have better. Anyways thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/3/2019 7:38:00 AM

Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year ! :)