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My Winter

My winter months are not extreme For loads of snow, I sit and dream Of making a snowman with hat and scarf Throwing snowballs, having a laugh. . My winter is of mist and rain Frosty patterns on window pane Pulled out a pencil to try to sketch The pretty window, that's quite a test Fading light gives life an eerie glow Hoping tonight it might just snow Flurries drift from the sky Hear the oohs and ahhhs of passers by Winter is magical whatever the weather Drinking mulled wine , just being together Penned November 20 2017

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Chris Hagy

Date: 1/7/2018 9:12:00 PM

Beautifully crafted Seren :) My winter has been a frozen tundra this year...it's not quite as magical with wind chills at -20 below zero!...but I guess it does keep me and hubby together if on!y to keep warm! haha :) Enjoy your wine :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/7/2018 10:56:00 PM

Thank you Chris...yours sounds a magical winter too lol....Seren

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/15/2017 9:27:00 PM

A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Seren - blessings to you, friend - beautiful! :-)

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/7/2018 10:57:00 PM

Thank you Gregory, sorry for delay in replying....Seren

Roy Pett

Date: 12/1/2017 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Seren, love your couplets, hate mulled wine though, well written, enjoyed. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/30/2017 8:03:00 PM

Lovely pen! Congratulations :) xomo!

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/29/2017 2:55:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in my contest, Seren, well done! Viv x

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/19/2017 4:25:00 PM

Beautiful poem Seren, sure like that last line!! :)

Tim Smith

Date: 11/19/2017 11:35:00 AM

I'll send you our snow this year

Jan Allison

Date: 11/19/2017 11:28:00 AM

What a fun poem and your words made me smile as every time I've visited Wales it's rained and rained (we had a friend in Caersws) . I can do without snow as our little Island grinds to a halt and in 2012 we had such a terrible time with so many livestock lost:-( Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/19/2017 8:10:00 AM

Very nice Seren. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/19/2017 7:12:00 AM

Delightfully adorable poem. GL with the contest, Seren.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/19/2017 5:50:00 AM

I agree with you completely my friend! It's all about who you get to spend the glorious time of Winter with! Winter is such fun, but snow is highly overrated, it's not that big of a deal, but when you don't get it, I can see you wanting to have some just to play in and see it's wondrous beauty it bestows! I do like the snow, sometimes it's just glorified too much! What a fantastic write about this fun subject! What a grandiose poem, such a lovely piece my friend, Great Work Seren!!