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My Wind

The wind is yelling in my ear what is it trying to tell me? The strength of it's muscles push me in the wrong direction Like a driver steering through life the wind pushes everything out of it's way. The flow of the air thickens and cools, as Summer comes to a gentle end. The sun rises and falls each day, as the wind picks up on its way. The sea breeze blows upon my face with a powerful cry. The wind is my road. I can now see the wind that is leading my life, such as the sails sailing a sail boat. It's powerful guidance will take me in the right direction and lead me to success. This is my wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/12/2010 1:52:00 AM
this is really deep with a good metaphor
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