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My Wild Gypsy Muse

through my garden gate she goes roaming with my pen my wild gypsy muse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/3/2020 6:11:00 AM
That is brilliant. Happy writing in a Happy New Year, Kai
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 5:46:00 AM
Thanks ever so much.
Date: 12/23/2019 9:38:00 AM
Nice write Lin, did you know the gypsy name came from Europeans wrongly thinking they (Roma people) came from Egypt hence Gyptsies, I thought it was interesting!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/23/2019 9:42:00 AM
I had no idea that's how the word came about. You're full of news and kind comments this morning. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 12/18/2019 4:58:00 PM
My grandmother's matrilineal grandfather was a Gypsy from the camp. Te aves bahtali)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/19/2019 4:41:00 AM
Te aves i tu
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/18/2019 5:25:00 PM
Literally, be happy. The answer: Te aves i tu (You too)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2019 5:13:00 PM
hmmm much shorter to say 'hello,' but then a Gypsy wouldn't know that. Thanks.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/18/2019 5:05:00 PM
Translation is hello (addressing to woman).
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2019 5:03:00 PM
Romani? Translation please. I've always been fascinated with their lifestyle.
Date: 12/18/2019 3:09:00 AM
Indeed ... HAD to dip my toes in this one! ;o)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2019 12:48:00 PM
Well, by all means. Take off those shoes and wade in. Thanks, Greg.
Date: 12/17/2019 2:49:00 PM
I love this... I can see a long quill one day... and then a sharpy the next... coloring and writing the day away... hehe... Merry Christmas. Love your work. Ann
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2019 4:36:00 PM
lol Ann. She marches to the beat of her own drum. Thanks ever so much for your humor and kind comments.
Date: 12/17/2019 10:14:00 AM
Keep her well in sight Lin, if she goes you might lose her. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2019 10:51:00 AM
Good morning, dear Tom. We have a pact. She can roam about freely, as long as she returns when I whisper her name. Thank you for your comments and advice.
Date: 12/17/2019 9:48:00 AM
Lin. So nice to find this Senryu this morning. Thankful for your Wild Gypsy Muse. -Richard
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2019 10:00:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Richard ~ I'll be sure to let her know.
Date: 12/17/2019 7:56:00 AM
Follow her because she always creates such beautiful blooms from your pen. Loved this Lin, short, sweet and absolutely beautiful.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2019 9:25:00 AM
Thank you for your dulcet thoughts, Chris. I have no choice but to follow...she ran off with my pen.

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