My Wants

I want to climb the hillside To see each wonderous view And find the peace I long for And share it all with you.. I want to walk down winding lanes And see the fields of green Smell the pretty flowers Where the air is fresh and clean... I want you here beside me To see the woodlands grow To find peace and serenity Wherever we both go... I long to see the lakes And the gentle streams That sparkles in the sunlight A beautiful place to dream... I long to see the horses As they graze within their fields I want to feel the freedom And the wonder it shall yield... I want to hear the birds sing In the early morn of day Then see each glowing sunset At the end of everyday... I want you here beside me This country boy and me To share all the beauty You've opened my eyes to see..... I want to live this life Or maybe it's a dream.......

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 2:59:00 AM

Agnes Bugeja, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**

Skat A

Date: 8/25/2015 11:31:00 PM

Agnes, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 5/22/2014 4:54:00 AM

Very much like the classic The Red Wheelbarrow. Only with much better use of metaphors and excellent imagery. I love it!

Theresa Stephens

Date: 2/14/2014 8:48:00 AM

Hi Agnes, At first on reading your lovely heartfelt poem I thought it was written by a male not a female, so it was only when I finished reading it I realised my mistake. If only the men I had known in the past could have had the same outlook as you and I, but in my life I never experienced with any of them such appreciation of the joys of life together. I certainly hope your wishes are granted Regards, Theresa x.

Leon Enriquez

Date: 2/12/2014 6:59:00 PM

Dear Agnes: Dream big. Dream more. Dream lots. To make a dream come true, start with a fond dream. Keep dreaming. Then, just build a foundation. Your dream can sit on that firm ground. If Walt Disney can, surely you can. Loved your poem. It flows so naturally. Keep writing. Leon

Debbie Mills-Kelly

Date: 2/8/2014 10:19:00 PM

Gorgeous piece love.... really enjoyed reading !!

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/5/2014 1:41:00 AM

Great to read your free flowing feelings Agnes And i think, Dream or reality, the journey will be worthwhile..'

Agnes Bugeja
Date: 2/5/2014 2:15:00 AM

Thank you Joe for stopping by and Correct,Dream or reality, its the journey!!!!

Fayaz Bhat
Date: 2/5/2014 2:09:00 AM

Beautiful poem. I love your emotions.