My Voice

words stitched on a thread of silence--- my voice © kash poet 2012 ================ Placement:3rd Contest: Contest no. 183 (June 2012) Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/20/2012 5:34:00 PM

excellent in many ways Kash. Congratulations to you. A joy to read and easy to see why it's a winner.

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 6/19/2012 7:21:00 PM

congrats..simplicity enamelled with a powerful meaning!!!!!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/17/2012 2:13:00 PM

Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/15/2012 1:23:00 PM

Nice piece,Kash...Congratulations on your win...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2012 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#183" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/15/2012 11:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning Haiku... another pearl... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2012 8:01:00 AM

WELL deserved win, Kashinath. I'd give it higher than third!! Congrats.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/15/2012 7:41:00 AM

congratulations on your winning poem.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2012 6:58:00 AM

homerun!... congrats on your fine win, kashi buddy..:) huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/15/2012 6:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Kash, with this exceptional haiku! Love it!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/15/2012 4:56:00 AM

Congrats on further success with this powerful haiku...such a MAGICAL THREAD! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/23/2012 5:05:00 AM

Back to ponder this silence once more. Very nice haiku. .....glad your wave lengeth is adjusted also! Is this a medical procedure or a rest? G.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/22/2012 11:45:00 AM

you gotta give a new one, kashi buddy... ohmmm.. :) huggs!

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/22/2012 2:04:00 AM

These 3 little phrases say so much. You once again have been my muse. I will call it Silence.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/22/2012 2:06:00 AM

oops! Huggs TLee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2012 9:18:00 PM

hmmm, I see you have not put a new one since last time I was able to see poems here. Are you also busy, kashinath?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2012 1:26:00 AM

oh kashi romeo, where art thou, lol..:) huggs and hello!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/20/2012 8:32:00 AM

I do like this ,, enjoy reading it ,,,, thank you for reading my poem on KHAN ;} yes he is back in India now,,, I knew him for 17 year !

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/18/2012 11:18:00 PM

Awesome Kash ;-) enjoy the weekend ahead!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/18/2012 8:58:00 AM

wonderful poem is this, Kash, love your words, so strong here. harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2012 4:27:00 AM

things we cannot say, kashi... a stirring ku with a kick in the end.. wowie!.. come over.. winning huggs! :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 5/18/2012 4:13:00 AM

I love this line- on a thread of silence it has a silent ring to it- blessings and well done, Brenda : )

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/17/2012 9:46:00 PM

I will TURN UP my hearing aids then....haha...beautiful image! :) Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2012 9:08:00 PM

wow, you must be barely whispering. but anyway, I LOVE this.

David Williams

Date: 5/17/2012 4:15:00 PM

Kash, great haiku, hope you dont lose your words..David

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/17/2012 2:39:00 PM

very good haiku....sometimes silence is best.