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I heard a quiet, curious sound Like the beating of a tiny wing Dropped my rake and looked around For some hidden fairy-tail thing That's when my heart began to sing Around my head a burst of green With a glorious scarlet breast The most wonderful bird Id ever seen With wings that never came to rest Oh lovely, my little garden guest For several months it stayed with me Flitting here and hovering there I think a nest high in my tree It seemed we had no earthly care The summer of my hummingbird affair
4/4/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/14/2013 5:36:00 PM
This is lovely Barbara. Glad to see you have been winning laurels. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/14/2013 6:48:00 AM
great write and win.... congrats
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Date: 5/13/2013 11:52:00 PM
A beautiful guest indeed. Many congrats for the win.
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Date: 5/13/2013 11:33:00 PM
congrats Barbara on your win in my contest
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Date: 5/13/2013 11:11:00 PM
Congratulations...you described a real living fairy thing...just lovely. SuZ
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Date: 4/21/2013 3:46:00 AM
very nice write Barbara....winning wishes
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Date: 4/5/2013 9:57:00 PM
I love hummingbirds and love your poem! I feel the same as you do when I see one. By the way, I live in New York City and am just visiting California.....
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:07:00 PM
Lovely poem
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Date: 4/4/2013 9:45:00 AM
... so cute .... It was a nice visit .... - A cozy poem to read Barbara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/4/2013 9:02:00 AM
If this doesn't cheer up a rainy morning, nothing will !! Love it, so delightful.......should do well, and Francine will love it too!!
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