My Verse

Make wordplay move as thoughts align, Yes start the flow of reach that comes. Voice sanguine grooves as craft designs, Entice the glow of vivid sums; Rise to the call as feelings surge, Subtle the stay of fond embrace; Etch that free fall of simple urge. Intent finds ways to affluent trace, Make moments shine in ample reach; Ply then the praise for thought sublime, Raise wonders mine in poignant pitch; Inscribe fond praise all in due time, Notes of a kind can front clear range, Thrill in deep mind that strings bold change. Leon Enriquez 18 September 2016 Singapore

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Keith Logan

Date: 9/20/2016 3:03:00 AM

I rather like this poem but must confess to not fully understanding it. In particular the third from last line "Inscribe fond raise all in due time" beats me. I also feel that "strings bold" might be swapped to good effect.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 9/20/2016 7:56:00 AM

Dear Keith: Thank you for your comments and keen observation. I made a typo error in line 12. The right word is "praise" and not 'raise' and thus the final line 14 makes sense. Thanks for your kind suggestion. All the best then, Leon.