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My Vase of Flowers Final Days

It's sad to see my flowers die that once gave beauty to the eye. Oh, Look! See their lavender leaves stretching out like arms opening wide for a good-bye hug! .

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/27/2021 12:16:00 AM

I often look at the cut flowers which are truly beautiful but they do not last long. These days I prefer a pot plant of some sort. Enjoyed this piece..Delice

Black Matta

Date: 9/7/2020 2:11:00 PM

Good topic for a brilliant poem. Nice!

Gideon Foli

Date: 3/29/2020 4:52:00 AM

So sad to see most dreams dying and mingling with dying bells especially at this time of COVID-19. Let keep hopes alive because our God is alive forever more. Awesomely inspiring piece dear Darlene. Keep them coming my dear friend. Love and hugs from me to you. Cheerio!!!!

Old Buck

Date: 8/30/2017 9:57:00 PM

Darlene: Because that was so cute, it makes me wonder why only one submission in 2017? Keep them coming or should I say "get them coming." Thanks for all you've shared with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Jan Allison

Date: 4/15/2017 5:22:00 PM

aww what a cute thought ... I will make sure I give them a hug before I throw them away Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford
Date: 4/15/2017 5:59:00 PM

Hi, Jan, thanks for reading my poem. Toss them gently in the trash, then buy some fresh ones for more cash!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/15/2017 5:16:00 PM

Lovely :)

Darlene Gifford
Date: 4/15/2017 6:02:00 PM

Thanks, Maureen. I'm glad you enjoyed. I guess any subject is good material for a poem. And as soon as I noticed those dying flowers, inspiration hit.