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My Valentine Story

The gate was open We came into each other I gave her my heart She desired to give me hers We then exchanged vows of love… My Valentine Story Russell Sivey Entrant into Olajide Adelana's "Story of Valentine" contest 1/24/2012

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/25/2012 1:11:00 PM

Lovely romantic write, my friend

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/25/2012 12:15:00 PM

What a wonderful way to start your lives together, Russell. (Do you have the key to that gate?) It sounds like an outdoor wedding -- at least that's how I'm picturing it. Excellent entry for Olajide's contest! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2012 11:15:00 PM

VEry sweet one, my friend. I think Olajide is going to like it a lot!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2012 10:11:00 PM

fo fast on the draw, russell.. i haven't read this contest full and here you are, posting a gracious, romantic piece... i go gooey.. winning streaks again and again!;) hugggs!

Don Johnson

Date: 1/24/2012 9:56:00 PM

when you've been burnt, its harder then, to trust a lover twice, noble thoughts are there indeed, and watch out 4 the lice:)