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'my Valentine Gift'

a little patchy this treasure worth more than gold a keepsake for you the exuberance is back my heart is pounding again
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/21/2012 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Wilma! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/21/2012 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Andrea's~ "Tanka Your Valentine Gift" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:45:00 PM
Wilma,Congrats on your win in Andrea's contest.Enjoyed it first time around.
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Date: 2/19/2012 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely Tanka Wilma, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:03:00 PM
Wilma, awesome write. I really liked this Tanka. Well done. Congrats on placing on Andrea's winners list........................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:24:00 AM
Lovely tanka, congratulations xx
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:37:00 PM
congrats Wilma on a wonderful win for this loving gift lucv....
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:06:00 PM
Wilma. what I loved most in this one was the last two lines about exuberance back again. Nothing like fresh romantic love, or the REfreshment of it!!! Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/18/2012 8:58:00 PM
sweetness, wilma.. rush hour, so here’s a generic greeting to you and the rest….loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:09:00 PM
Wilma, hi..... i love my new pumping heart... pumm pumm... very nice...pd
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:59:00 PM
You said it perfecty.... no price on a smile .... well written piece... missed you latley....But now Im back in NY!!!... and the Soup... luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:01:00 PM
Yes, anything that comes from the heart id worth more than gold! Love the message here, missy :D mwahugs!
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:19:00 AM
Very good tanka by you Wilma.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.
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