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A butterfly dream on its bright gossamer wings a flight to the past bringing those sweet kisses back second honeymoon package. ============000=========== Placement: 2nd ( Feb. 2012) Contest:Tanka your Valentine gift Sponsor:Andrea Dietrich By:kashinath karmakar

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Date: 2/21/2012 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Andrea's~ "Tanka Your Valentine Gift" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:02:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win with your beautifully romantic tanka! Thank you for your encouraging comments on my writing. It means a lot to me. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:04:00 PM
congrats on your contest win, a very well crafted tanka and so romantic :-)
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Date: 2/19/2012 11:34:00 AM
Kash, wonderful words, my friend. Congrats on placing on Andrea's winners list........................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:49:00 AM
Oh, if I could just relive this dandy poem of yours, Kash. To go back in time and have a do-over. Such a romantic notion expressed in this winning tanka. It shows how your poetry is an outward reflection of your sincere heart's desire. Gwendolen
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:15:00 AM
Lovely tanka Kash congrats xx
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful tanka Kash, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:12:00 PM
congrats Kash on a wonderful second place win for this gift luv..
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Date: 2/18/2012 8:45:00 PM
yehey, kashi.. rush hour, so here’s a generic greeting to you and the rest….loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 2/18/2012 8:26:00 PM
wow, Kash, Excellent work from you and you did not get this just for being a fave poet of mine. Susan loved it too. Before my knowing you wrote it, it had our highest marks. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/12/2012 12:02:00 AM
This was quite a well packaged write Kash,, good to read today,,)
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:24:00 AM
Love this Kash, especially the "gossamer" line.. All the best for the contest with this gem of a Tanka :)
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:03:00 AM
Very sweet tanka..i love it :) C.C
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Date: 2/7/2012 3:14:00 AM
ohh and check spelling of your "honeymoon" here ..:)
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:53:00 AM
Thanks Nette.
Date: 2/7/2012 3:13:00 AM
another soupy mail for you! :)
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:31:00 AM
a free-flowing verse that truly delights, kashi... sooo dreamy; winning huggs! :)
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Date: 2/6/2012 6:45:00 PM
A beautiful tanka. I love butterflies.
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:50:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today Kash some fine pieces , Declan ...
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:54:00 PM
nice tanka Kash. Thanks fro your kind comments. Love, joyce
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