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My Valentine Etheree

A lovely peacock is, This love of mine. A rainbow concealed, He would not reveal his many colors until he felt I would respond in kind to his glorious, colorful romance. As years increase I remain spellbound still! © 2011 Connie Marcum Wong

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/23/2011 3:51:00 PM

Lovely Etheree here.Liked the comparison of your love with peacock very much.

The Fringe

Date: 6/30/2011 8:13:00 PM

Yep, we wait in fear for your step toward us. And when we love truly, we are hesitating, unsure, wondering if we have been rejected, or accepted. How we love you gals, and our delicate egos shimmer with unknowing. Then the step towards us and everything is then fine and we talk about our silly ponderings as if nothing had ever happened :) Well, that's me at least, haha.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2011 2:10:00 PM

That is some more of a love to be like a peacock..Enjoyed..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2011 10:07:00 PM

connie, I may use that one poem for the challenge, the one you just commented to. Let me go now and see if you have any more new posts!

Simone Segal

Date: 2/15/2011 2:03:00 PM

Hey! my long lost friend, how are you? lovely valentine's poem, hope all is well with you and family! love, SimoneX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2011 11:51:00 PM

oh, I am glad to see you posted this one here, Connie. It's so cute. I love when you do etheree. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2011 11:51:00 PM

and post some more!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/14/2011 3:26:00 PM

Love this Etheree, Connie. " It's been a while. I'm glad to see you and pray all is well. Happy Valentine's Day. Always, Annalise (Audrey)

John Rhinem

Date: 2/14/2011 2:06:00 PM

S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```C*O*N*N*I*E M*A*R*C*U*M W*O*N*G¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2011 12:16:00 PM

Super good news Connie and a super good write I have read from your creative pen on this day of luv... please send us some of that super warm weather my friend.. keeping u all in our prayers and wishing u the best Valentine's Day ... with lots of luv..