My Vacation
as i went to hawii i saw beaches
good thing they are not covered in leaches
i thought i was tough
those waves are rough
as i went boating
i saw two fish floating
are they dead
i had said
i went back to shore
but i didnt know what more
as it became dawn
i finally yawned
oh what a day
i would say!
Copyright © Brooke S. | Year Posted 2011
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