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My Universe

A universe exists Somewhere beyond my reach A place I wish to explore I look to the heavens To ask my questions Instead I have many more If everything is connected Why am I separate Just another face in the crowd Anonymously wandering Feeling so disconnected With my head in the clouds You reveal the answer You're living within me A Universe within my heart Unfanthonable Love A place of great Beauty I desire to explore every part

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 4/4/2015 2:45:00 PM

Beautiful. Now you are my favorite poet. Sorry for late to reach your great works. Forgive me dear poet. I shall try to read your huge works as soon as possible. Best wishes from my soul....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2015 4:08:00 PM

You honor me! Thanks my new friend.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/21/2013 11:19:00 AM

Lovely....

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 11/14/2012 2:58:00 AM

Your connected here at Poetry soup :)...but i do love the concept/idea that we are all connected....You make me ponder a question that I have visited many times in my life ' what is my purpose' ...anyway, I still havent answered that question.....TY for sharing another gr8 poem Rick .....hugs Shaz

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2012 7:35:00 AM

Thanks so much, keep seeking and it will be revealed to you.

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 11/13/2012 12:17:00 PM

Great write!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2012 7:35:00 AM

Thanks

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/12/2012 2:42:00 PM

The inner universe, Richard..like this very much...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2012 5:28:00 PM

Thanks again Harry!

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/12/2012 1:05:00 AM

Wow....This is a very heartfelt write here Richard.I know what that feeling feels like.The answer comes in due time.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2012 7:43:00 AM

Hi Dan, thanks for weighing in, I hope you are at one with the Universe who is the light and the way!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/11/2012 10:41:00 PM

a universe within my heart, i love this line Richard. thx for stopping by :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2012 7:44:00 AM

Your welcome, I appreciate you dropping by.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/11/2012 8:42:00 PM

Good job Richard; I believe that we can create our own Universe. The beauty of it is - that it is like no other. Go for it and find the beauty of yours. Many blessings. Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 9:16:00 PM

Thanks.

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/11/2012 7:58:00 PM

We try to reach it but ...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 8:10:00 PM

But what???

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 11/11/2012 12:48:00 PM

Hi, Rick! Nice write! I like the flow/But I do not know/What is "I do not know"... Shall you allow me to write and officially post some Questionku(s?)? I like the rhythm very much! (^_^) Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 1:00:00 PM

I would be honored, let me know when you have finished.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2012 12:00:00 PM

You have written a very good poem, I like it. Have a nice Sunday afternoon Richard. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 12:22:00 PM

Thanks Anne

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 11:24:00 AM

Richard, a very nice poem,, love the way you expanded the universe within your self ... xox~pd

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 12:24:00 PM

It is ever expanding. Thanks Linda

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 11/11/2012 11:10:00 AM

well Richard to view the universe you have to fly, so just spread your wings and off ypu go, but put a bit of spirit into it, love your poem, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 12:25:00 PM

What an amazing flight we will have. Thanks for reading.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/11/2012 11:03:00 AM

Ohh, I love it, Richard. Yes, he is our Universe. It all begins with Him. Love it dearly. Awesome one. Great realization. Love ya, Toquyen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 12:26:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, I made some changes so you may wish to re- read. Have a wonderful day.