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My Universe

From the maternal gloom into the light I came. A start of nature’s bloom, the end of winter’s reign. And I was born by chance where universal whales splash fountains of the stars with their gigantic tails. From everywhere the winds blow round horrific backs, beams of the sunny rings gleam on eternal necks. And in the part it’s me who praise all that matinee, my cup is full indeed here with a droplet yet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/15/2010 3:48:00 AM
Lovely work,I am busy lately,yet i ll find time to read more of you in the coming days,great work!Celene. ..
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:05:00 AM
I love the jazzy flow to your verse
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Date: 2/7/2010 11:04:00 AM
Very thought provoking write that you have penned in this one. I especially like the last two lines. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for taking time to comment on my work. Sara
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Date: 12/25/2009 4:42:00 AM
contemplative verse! Oleg! nice work! jimbo
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Date: 12/16/2009 4:48:00 AM
Hi Oleg! I enjoyed your leaping poetry between the sea-creature and the universe! cool effect! jimbo
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