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My Unfold

I died a long time ago It was when I realized that I couldn't find my ego In responding to a million of hovering black crows Feasting slowly on every hair of my eyebrows Made me swear never to borrow Other people's life force, life line or even life show For I died a long time ago When I let go My god, my soul and my gold I came to life just a minute ago When I came to realize that heaven and hell resides within my soul And as for that I need to be bold I am feasting on all of the million crows Patching my body back from becoming glory holes For now I came to life with my final bow To not let go My god, my soul and my unfold

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2014 5:05:00 PM

Hello Rozmanshah, , Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2014 9:45:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Rozmanshah :) - I choose your first fine written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kenisha Shines

Date: 3/8/2014 8:12:00 AM

WELCOME to poetry soup,nice write.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2014 6:24:00 AM

Rozmanshah, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Rozmanshah Abdullah
Date: 3/8/2014 10:09:00 PM

Hi there, thanks for the warm welcome, much appreciated, will definitely check your 'special pair' regards rozman

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2014 3:14:00 AM

Rozmanshah, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Rozmanshah Abdullah
Date: 3/8/2014 10:06:00 PM

Thank you :)