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My Ultra Babe -

I need your ultra desperation your ultra conflagration of love making exhilaration, I want your ultra shout and pout give me your slap attack the amber of your abuse, the saffron of your emotions, I crave the playful plenitude of your ultra uppidy attitude, you let me experience hyperventilation at your disappearance then inflation of euphoria in my Heart's utopia by your reappearance, I want to know your ultra sadness that song you share with the twilight of despair, your ultra madness, your vortex of female complex, I desire your hot and haunted psychology your genius of ultra ingenuity, the pulp of your passion, sometimes you love me most when you hurt me a pathology of love cut sympathy that I can handle best, earning the ultra soft surface of your pillowed chest where I can rest the weight of iron soul, and slumber at your behest, I want the whip of your hips and the sip of your lips, I want the pleasure plethora of your ultra vulva to access the pagoda of your sexual yoga to concoct in you the froth of organic soda, I want your Gospels and Revelations the Path and the Wrath, your cross of ultra conquest the morning of your ultimate ascendance the midnight of your ravishing bite the bounty of your breast and the burn of your brimstone give me the lyric of your ultra breath, your ultra love keeps me alive! J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/17/2014 12:06:00 AM
I'm glad your Ultrababe keeps you alive, Justin. You deserve the best! I hope she is all that you want her to be...Saffron....it is a key ingredient in Persian recipes! How fascinating. Just a little mixed with water...and it gives off a certain rich golden color that decorates the rice dishes so well. It is a very precious and quite expensive...NOT so easy to find the unadulterated king that is the richest in flavor and aroma.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/17/2014 2:48:00 PM
She is the magic I need to live beyond the static and tragic of life. I swell for her complexity. My Ultra Babe has those saffron qualities, rare, expensive to spirit, and radiant. We must savor the rare beauty and strength while we have hold of it Eileen...J.A.B.
Date: 10/11/2014 7:52:00 AM
I am impressed and moved once again. If I were judging your contest this would surely be at the top of the podium. I love the rawness, the wanting is so seductive and the imagery stirs the spirit. I am glad I found this one this morning.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/11/2014 1:58:00 PM
My Ultra Babe is at the top of my podium Richard. Yes, addressing every aspect of her personality and passion, being seduced by her sensuous storm, by her defiance of the norm, I seducing her with my wherewithal and crave. J.A.B.
Date: 9/16/2014 12:33:00 AM
wow you really WANT her in every way. I really like this. It reminded me of a rock song where the guys says all the funny things he loves about the girl, can't think of its name now. oh, and thanks for putting me on your list. and for inspiring me to write that poem about where poetry came from!!!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/16/2014 2:03:00 PM
I need a woman of great depths and heights, a woman of ultra range, ultra beauty Andrea, one that presents my heart with awesome battle and passion. I was so happy that you entered your talent and beauty in my Contest, your poem is very special, that poetry came from your passion. J.A.B.
Date: 9/9/2014 5:28:00 AM
A romance of extreme desire, passion, love. Yet the feeling is clear, what can we reach for next, is there something beyond ultra. "I want to know your ultra sadness", powerful line..romance is not all sunshine and roses. And I love "saffron of your emotions" Saffron is a great word, fun to use.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/9/2014 8:45:00 PM
She is the only beauty that can take me to, and beyond the Ultra...I'm very glad you address the psychology of my poem Monterey, sadness, extremes of brilliance and passion etc...are fundamental to appreciating the Ones we love. Yeah, I got excited when I discovered that the saffron metaphor would her justice. J.A.B.
Date: 9/9/2014 12:50:00 AM
Beautifully written Justin. An ultra delight to that woman in your life. Sending you a smile, Verlena
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/9/2014 8:29:00 PM
She's an ultra Light of passion, she can dim to delicious hue, dance, glow, burn, warm, blind with beauty and illuminate that heart. She's got it all Verlena, thanks for the ultra smile. J.A.B.
Date: 9/7/2014 3:39:00 AM
"you let me experience hyperventilation at your disappearance then inflation of euphoria in my Heart's utopia by your reappearance," I know those lines all too well and I love how you write it... beautiful... love this popping piece. Always loving and admiring...I'll be back in a heartbeat! Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/7/2014 1:58:00 PM
Yes Laura, yes, popping fresh and vibrant! Love can be so merciless with our breaths...the love and admiration is mutual Laura. Your heartbeats are fast! J.A.B.
Date: 9/6/2014 5:07:00 PM
Twice through...Many more will follow. I'm sure. Breathless at this beautiful bounty from you, Justin. You work magic.
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Date: 9/6/2014 7:34:00 PM
My Ultra Babe stirs the magic in me, the only woman that can give me the extremes of passion that make me a stronger Man Eileen. So glad you like my treasure, I'm smiling. J.A.B.

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