My Two Sons

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My flesh and blood refused to follow me refused the notion of the flood fought for right, not for me Duty served country proud Now we two sons confess we have transitioned to the dress Father hid all the witnesses to the truth of his two creations from the watchtower he decried the beauty, compassion and love all he derides

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Francis Brown

Date: 3/23/2020 5:08:00 PM

Nice write. Echoes reality; our reality.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2020 6:22:00 AM

profound write indeed Art,and proof that not everyone has to follow like blind sheep Hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/16/2019 2:18:00 AM

Profound poem, Arthur! Seems tolerance is a bane emotion. Heavy free-thinking poetry. Muse ink worthy. Love and peace always.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/3/2019 5:31:00 AM

Wow.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 10/3/2019 9:53:00 PM

It certainly makes one to think. Deep and perfectly crafted. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/3/2019 4:51:00 PM

You have such a way with words, Arthur. You treat such a topic with understanding and acceptance. Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/3/2019 4:52:00 PM

Have not seen you around lately; hope all is well...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/3/2019 1:42:00 PM

Compelling poem, Arthur. Attitude towards gays are changing, but we still have a way to go. Best wishes, Carolyn

Joseph May

Date: 10/3/2019 9:14:00 AM

A deep poem Arthur...Best wishes

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 4/10/2019 11:20:00 AM

Gender differences is created by us human beings...if a girl can dress and work like a man means it's in her...and it's natural...so why can a boy adopt the same. It's all in our eyes and mind. We were born naked...the rest are our doings...thanks for sharing. Regs Sunita